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Hey there, Renagrade! It's good to see you've started your own brick comic.

This page, since you sent it to me when I was asking for guest strips a while back, was featured today on Zombie Outbrick.

Thank you =)

This is one of the better-looking lego comics out there. Well done!

Thank you VERY much for all of this advice. To be honest, this comic is entirely a test run. It's already completed, I'm just slowly posting them, also, it wasn't made for this format. The original format was that there where words underneath, and they where about 3x as many pictures. I needed to shorten it though, since I'm trying to make it only have 100 or so comics. My next series is VERY original. Once again, thank you

I've got a couple of things to say here. I"ve read through your entire comic so far. I have a few things to comment on. However, I'm frankly getting annoyed. A "limited time offer" to check out someones comic? You act as if you're doing someone a favor to look at their comic. You're not. I could care less who sees my comic or not. And commenting on someone elses comic to tell them to "check out my comic" is annoying also. In regards to the strip so far, it seems as if you're putting all of your pictures through some effect in some photo editing program or the pictures are just blurry. Either way, you should probably fix that, it's distracting. Additionally, you introduced way too many characters at once, so it's getting kind of confusing. You haven't even given us a memorable name yet. Character developement is important too. The comic jumped from area to area, it's really had to keep track. You might want to check out a few comics to look into that. THis brings me to another point. Yours is hardly an original idea. There are 2 other lego Zombie themed webcomics out there, both are pretty good. Also - you don't need to put "to be continued after nearly half the strips, we know that the story is going forward.
My advice - Make pics less blurry/don't use whatever effect you've used thus far
- don't advertise on others comics
- Give names of your characters, and show the readers a little about them.
- Make the dialoge less choppy, more fluid.
- Stay with one setting so the readers can get familiar with it. Don't jump around from place to place this early in the story.