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21st Jan 2017, 9:58 PM #1
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21st Jan 2017, 11:36 AM #2
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I would like to start by saying I enjoyed reading this and will keep track of its updates.

On to the review:

The colours gained my attention right away, with a great contrast between colours used.

The pacing is what I would expect for an action scene and feels well planned.

The text seems to change font size every now and again, it stopped me enjoying the panels and for some reason I started thinking
about font sizes and it distracted my reading of your work.

I feel as though a lot will be explained in the coming pages, as I felt a little confused when all of the protagonists buddies burst onto the scene and was left thinking 'how did he get here? who are they? if they can transport themselves why didn' they appear inside of the mountain before the bad guy opened the door? --- But then I put myself back in line and realised I really enjoyed reading it and look forwards to finding out the answers to my questions!

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20th Jan 2017, 11:20 PM #3
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20th Jan 2017, 11:14 PM #4
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[spoiler]Name: Aima (Play on the ancient Greek haima - meaning blood)

Aima is a military scout, having served much of his life contracted to his countries armed forces.
Growing up in a world where demons are a very real threat, Aima learned at a young age the peril
they pose, losing his family at the age of 10 to Fear, one of the Lords of Hell.

Aima, having nowhere to turn to in a tired and battle worn world turned to his countries military
for shelter, food and acknowledgement, rising quickly through the ranks as a scout for the vanguard forces.

His ancestral line carries a burden that Aima, the last of his bloodline must now carry alone, he
is linked by blood to an ancient Lord of Hell, Abaddon, the Lord of Destruction.

Normally, with more blood relatives alive and the onslaught shared, the pain and suffering fighting back Abaddons attempts
to gain control of Aimas mind would have been manageable...

However, with him being the sole survivor, Abaddons personality and power are finding cracks in Aimas psyche and starting tho leak through...

Aimas sword is a family relic used historically to slay large demons, the tape covered hand-hold is to allow the
sword to be used as a battering ram against overbearing enemies, Aima wears a glove on his left hand to allow
for better grip whilst using it in this manner.

(I won't go any further than this, as I don't want to destroy any of the impact of my pages!)[/spoiler]
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19th Jan 2017, 10:47 PM #5
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Please could you review Bound by Blood? Thank you!!!

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18th Jan 2017, 10:56 PM #6
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Number 5 feels like the most fitting in my humble opinion.
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17th Jan 2017, 10:54 PM #7
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My cover page has the anti-hero Aima surrounded by the lords of Hell, in a kneeling position, with much of the area dark.

This was to convey the fact that Aima is weaker than his adversaries, he is outnumbered and overwhelmed.

The art style is the same as that found within the comic so people know what to expect.
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17th Jan 2017, 10:44 PM #8
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My 2 cents.

Person A is insulting person B.

B is offended, asks for message to be edited or removed.

If it is respectfully done, no worries, person A has learnt a valuable lesson and person B feels re-empowered.

If person A declines the request, person B reports the incident, person A is temporarily banned.
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17th Jan 2017, 10:31 PM #9
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I would love for you to review my work!

Bound by Blood

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17th Jan 2017, 8:36 PM #10
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Heya!

I would really appreciate a review of Bound by Blood!

Thanks in advance,

Nathan.

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15th Jan 2017, 10:38 PM #11
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Thank you for the review!

Yes, Aimas blood seeping from his eyes will be explained :).

Thanks for the comments on the colour scheme and angles. =]

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15th Jan 2017, 1:50 PM #12
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Hi!

If you have the time, could you please critique my comic?

Thanks in advance!

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14th Jan 2017, 10:42 PM #13
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This is the page I am currently working on for Bound by Blood :)!

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11th Jan 2017, 10:22 PM #14
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Hello!

If you find the time, I would love for you to critique my work!

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Thanks,

Nathan.
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"Bound by Blood", 11th Jan 2017, 5:41 PM #15
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The world is bleak, centuries of war against Hell have ravaged mankind, however all is not lost...a rebellion within the halls of Hell itself has caused disaray amongst its demons, a rebellion sparked by the extermination of the few humans who share the blood of demons, the blood link.

One human with the blood link remains, and the ancient lords of Hell will do anything to protect it, for if it is lost, so too is their link to the human world.
...But a link has two ends, and attached to Aima lies a horrific ancient power, the likes of which may cause Hells lords to question their own actions...
Aima, tired and disillusioned from years of battle can feel a very malevolent grasp vying for his being and soul.
Time is of the essence and Hell is calling...

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22nd Jul 2016, 9:14 PM #16
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Thank you so much for the critique :) I have been visiting family so sorry for the late reply ^^.

I fully understand the points you made and with the indication lines you have drawn can see how to rectify it and more importantly apply it to pages in the future!

Thanks again,

Nathan ^^!
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10th Jul 2016, 6:30 PM #18
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9th Jul 2016, 11:55 PM #19
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This will be my inner page following from the front cover so to speak.

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9th Jul 2016, 10:55 PM #20
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Just a couple of pages I have recently finished :) ^^!
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