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"please critique my art", 11th Mar 2012, 12:11 PM #1
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I have recently started a new comic and am wondering what you think of the art, because I dont explain whats going on yet and I feel it may be hard to understand what the hell is going on. some constructave critisism would be really helpfull at this stage.]here
11th Mar 2012, 12:14 PM #2
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You misspelt Prologue. Otherwise the art shows promise. The tank on page 1 is cool but the image is two large for the page format.
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11th Mar 2012, 12:25 PM #3
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