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I have been working on graphics for the site and this is a logo for the comic I came up with. I am not 100% done but the rest is mostly the wording and the background colors so I figured I would share this piece as is with just the base drawing. Let me know what you think yeah/nay and all that good stuff.

Comic title left off to avoid promoting in non promoting forum.


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The top image I shrunk the wing to make it more inline with the demon wing. The bottom one as you can see has been fully redone to help add the same hollow space in the Angle wing as we see in the Demon wing.

Oooh nice :D It really draws my eyes. Now with a cool background, it will be awesome.

The title is an important part of this so I think it would be okay to display it and then we can give you more useful feedback. The wings of the red figure seem too light weight compared to the blue figure, so I would suggest filling in the voids a little more with red flames or something. If this is a background to the title, I wonder if all the details might make it too busy, and how big is this going to be on your page, and how readable will it be at the target size.

I'd say it's unbalanced, with the blue wing being higher, bigger and denser. The red one looks just gorgeous, so I would only edit the blue one to balance it out.

Aside from that, it's very nice, stylish and also quite to the point: it's enough to give a good idea of the kind of comic you're making.

Bump due to edit. You can see the changes and comments above. Thank you.

Looks pretty cool, although a bit complicated looking. A good logo should look good on a plain background as well as a complex/detailed one. Try overlaying your logo on both kinds to test it. Try putting it over, say, just a flat color as well as something like your comic page. If it still reads well, you're good to go.

I agree with Kupocake. It's a nice image in itself, but it's way to complex for a logo. It might fit better as a banner or something like that. Logos need to be very simplified

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Yes you are both correct and I mis-spoke. It is for a title page and my title bar across my comic. I meant Logo as in a representation for the comic but never intended this to be like the Nike swoosh or the McDonald's Arches.

So yeah that was my fault this image would look terrible at 64x64 pix. I am thinking about cutting off the feet for my title banner to as to make it not so long. The Background is all but nixed other than maybe a gradient fill. the wings are busy enough as it is and the image does not look right on anything other than simple color tones that help make the main image stand out. Thanks for the comments.

I think I am going with the seconded version as the wings seem to flow better with each other. This one was made due to suggestions here so I am glade I got them.

One last question. With they new wings is it obvious that the girl is supposed to be an angel? I guess the words My Angel My Demon might help but the image itself do you immediately draw this conclusion?

Looking at the picture without the title I guessed it was two things, either a fire and ice theme or an angel and demon theme.

If you want it to look more angel/demon themed without the text it might work to change the coloring of the demons wings to be more fire colored (yellow to red) and the angel's to be more light colored (though I would worry that this would blend in with the white). You could also be a bit more in your face with something like a demon tail and an angel (though I can't say if this would work with your actual comic). If you took the demon tail and wrapped it around it angel's legs a bit it would link the at the bottom of the picture a bit more like how the two figures are linked in the top one.

What I came up with. To be anchored to the right with the black heading out to the left till page ends. Might still add the tail as suggested the uncompressed file is still saved.

It's really, really stylish and pretty.
I wouldn't find the wing less angel-like when contrasted with the demon wings next to it, its curves are still much smoother and visibly different, while now drawn in a more uniformous style.

The only suggestion I could have left since your latest version with it would be to try it with the background colours flipped: angel on red, demon on blue. This sort of contrast often looks neat.