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"RPS - Eeeep, getting scared.", 6th Jun 2012, 10:03 AM #1
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Ok, I know my comic's content is going to be hard to reasonably critique. A lot of the humor and dialogue are VERY steeped in my niche audience (who, I am told, find me hilarious).

I am, however, very aware of a drastic art shift ever since I went to my tablet for the panel creation. And, while RPS is a gag-a-day (week?), I do try to maintain the theme that the characters are living in a consistent universe, wherein stories are happening and things may be happening behind the scenes.

I know that, for a while, some readers had trouble discerning between my characters. I am told, however, that this has gotten much easier with the medium change.

In any regard, I would love to see what people think (at the same time, I am pants-shittingly terrified of that exact thing).
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"interesting,", 10th Jun 2012, 11:26 PM #2
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- interesting.
as a gamer myself i can see where this has LOTS of promise. the shift to tablet is glaringly obvious and a excellent choice in both art and style , the writing is good - i would go with TTF fonts for all your dialouge and text they have excellent ones at blambot it will clean up the only weak spot i see so far , artisticly you are improving. and moving to a style that compliments the comic.

i know this isnt much depth but , overall its a good comic , well worth the read. :D
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11th Jun 2012, 5:01 AM #3
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:) Thank you!
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