Comic Fury Webcomic Hosting - critiques on my strips?

I'd really appreciate any advice or criticism on either of my two strips, The Dane Project and Knave's End as I'm interested in whether or not I'm bringing them in an interesting direction or not. Please don't be shy if you think one, the other, or both suck. I'll never get a problem fixed if I don't know it's there after all.

The Dane Project -- I really like your lively drawing style--brings out all the dog motions/emotions--perfect for the subject. Keep going! The other, I'm just too braindead after work to process--the text looks a bit more demanding.

Thanks. Yeah the other one's a bit convoluted and very much a work in progress. I've gotten better feedback on the Dane Project. I'll look at kinda trimming the dialogue in the future with the Knave's end strips. I did kinda rush a bunch out there. Thanks again for your input.