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Comic profile: Delruby Dawn
Delruby Dawn
A Bounty Hunting adventure
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Content flags: Violent ContentStrong LanguageNudity
Comic language: English
Genre: Action
Activity status: Active
Archive url: Visit archive
Last update: 17th Dec 2017, 4:52 PM
Number of comics: 50
Number of subscribers: 9
Visitors: 3645 visitors (16219 pages viewed)
Rating: 5 (1 votes)

Comic description

Delruby is a large super continent in a post-apocalyptic fantasy world. In this world, bounty hunting is the dominate profession, due to the large amount of crime.

Pam, a powerful. but chidlish psychic, has been dropped into the crime filled continent, and meets a long time bounty hunter, Hiroe Nakada. who agrees to hire Pam as a partner. Together they go on an adventure to find Hiroe's imprisoned father, and save the world from being destroyed by a powerful cult of gifted magic users


Most recent comments left on Delruby Dawn

AlpineBob (Guest)
3rd Jan 2018
"I'm that guy..."
This page is riddled with errors.
The second sentence has 5 errors: bizarre comma neither wants a part
The next paragraph is created from sentence fragments connected with commas. These should be reworked into actual sentences!
Hopefully the next pages will have fewer errors, like the sentence beginning "Hopefully".
Though the paragraph after that has 3 errors, which bodes ill for my hopes
(One is the comma, which should not be placed after the "but" - the other two are spelling: "diffrent" and "ment" are _meant_ to be spelled differently).
And the next paragraph has three more. I've should have an apostrophe, and a comma is needed after "Honestly", honestly.
Also, disgusting was spelled discusting, which is disgusting.
Finally, the final paragraph has two more errors: ill should be I'll, curent should be current.

I recommend you fix these, simply because this is your intro page. Any first time reader who cares will be discouraged by this barrage of errors.
I certainly am...

However, I have read through the rest of your story so far, simply because I have a soft spot for teleporters. It's not bad, except for the occasional "physic" for "psychic" - mostly in the pages towards the end. You might want to edit those. You might want to find a new editor, too; Luuvy doesn't seem to be finding everything...
Good luck!
Left on Chapter1Page0
17th Dec 2017
That's the last page of the chapter. I will be going on hiatus for a bit to write/refine chapter 3, and will officially announce that on twitter when the art for that announcement is ready. School and finals really got to me these last few weeks so excuse if this page seems a little rushed.
Left on Chapter 2 - Page 23
16th Nov 2017
this looks cool!
Left on Chapter2page16
17th Sep 2017
This is the last page on a long running backlog, you may see the quality of pages increase after this.
Left on Chapter2page6