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Storywriting is hard, amirite? Good luck with the adjustments you're planning during your hiatus (I really should get caught up on your comic, come to think of it).

Truthfully, I haven't felt the writing to be confusing or disorganized, but I could see how you feel a bit like George RR Martin where you've opened too many threads which you can't close. There are a lot of storylines you have started that could be worked upon, but I can see the desire to trim down. I'm doing something similar during my next hiatus.

I'm curious to see which ones you're keeping and which ones you'll just sort of write off or just hope we forget about. Maybe I'm a minority here, but I enjoyed the flashbacks.

Unfortunately, making a separate webcomic for flashbacks would run into pretty much the same "stakes" problem you already highlighted. They wouldn't make a very good webcomic by themselves, since the point of the backstory was to show exactly how things got this bad. Besides, I really don't have anymore backstory to show, at least, not anything crucial to the plot. That's part of the reason why I'm choosing now to make these changes.

I appreciate all the kind words! To be honest, though, I really hope that future chapters don't make you feel like a dog hanging out the car window. I really want the story to, y'know, actually make sense.

And I guess it's good to know at least one person won't mind Randall quitting his job.

Here's the thing about the flashbacks. I liked them, a lot. They are freaking gorgeous. They just didn't seem to have the same stakes as the present though (sort of a dilemma with flashbacks, prequels, and the like).

I was going to make a suggestion, but I decided against it (because I know what my answer would be to someone who suggested it). What about making the flashbacks their own comic? Yeah, I know. Who has that kind of time? Believe me, I wish I had, like, 5 of me to make all the comics I want to make.

I really want to see Princess Chroma, in whatever form, succeed. It's one of my favorite comics, period. So you do what is best for you, no matter what, okay? We'll all be here cheering you on. :)