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Sunstrike and Bluemist: An Origin Story
A webcomic
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Content flags: Violent Content
Language: English
Genre: Science-fiction
Activity status: Active
Archive url: Visit archive
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Last update: 6 days ago, 8:14 PM
Number of comics: 35
Number of subscribers: 21
Visitors: 1721 visitors (7735 pages viewed)
Rating: 5 (53 votes)

Webcomic description

Kairo, and agent for an organization known as The Secret Police (and also secretly a double agent) is tasked with training two very powerful super-mutant teenagers Kat and Evan as new recruits. Unfortunately, his other boss also has eyes on Kairo’s new protégés. Meanwhile, Kat and Evan struggle to control and hone their abilities, and move forward in spite of their pasts and weaknesses.

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ShaRose49
ShaRose49
I’m super into making comics with a lot of heart but also action and cartoony awesomeness, not to mention a lot of drama. Sci-fi, superhero, action, inspirational, are my general blend of genres.

Most recent comments left on Sunstrike and Bluemist: An Origin Story

ShaRose49
4 days ago
ShaRose49
Thank you. I guess some people are critical when you make girls emotional because that’s a stereotype. I’m not tryna stereotype anythin’ I’m just tryna make it real.
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NeilKapit
4 days ago
NeilKapit
Why would she seem like a sap? She's young and dealing with a lot, past, present, and future. I think the reaction is perfectly believable.
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ShaRose49
5 days ago
ShaRose49
Yeah he can be awkward with situations like this lol 😂
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ShaRose49
5 days ago
ShaRose49
Hey no problem!

And I appreciate the feedback, I think I understand what you’re saying. There are always ways that I can improve. And thank you for liking the shading it means a lot—I love to draw muscles, and for Kat this is actually important to her character
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...(RockB)
5 days ago
...(RockB)
(Now I wish I wasn't the only one saying something about it - maybe it's just me?)

"The mouth is meant to be like an anime mouth,"

*falls over* That is indeed much worse than Kat's mouth in panel 1.

"but maybe it would be better if I pronounced the lips a little less or something; smoothed them out?"
YES!! I just covered the lips in the little image with my finger so that there's just a slightly curved line between nose and the chin and it's (IMHO) much better.

But that said: The shading in the two anime-screenshots looks noticeably simpler than yours, nothing wrong with that (I like animes, too) but tbh, I like your shading here (much) better: It creates some depth and lets arms look round and muscular. That said, of these two images, I like the one with the 4 girls much better, because the faces look like they should in profile view and no side-mouth "twists my perception".
Now THAT said:
"I personally like the anime side look if it’s subtle."
Well hmm... I like it less than the more realistic look, but if it's subtle (as in, no two mouths) it's OK.

But really, I'd like to know other opinions about it now. It could be just me.

(Also, I just tried to remove the lips and put a more or less straight line from under Kat's nose to her chin, but it exceeds my abilities. Sorry.)
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