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Result in thread: Star Wars: The Last Jedi
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20th Dec 2017, 3:03 PM #1
ChilPhil

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I watched it last night. The special effects were great. I was disappointed with the writing/story. I felt there were plot holes, unnecessary scenes and things that don't get explained.

Below are changes I would have made if I had written it. There are a lot of spoilers below. Please do not read the spoiler below if you have not seen the movie.

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When Luke asks Rey who she is, he senses her lineage; she is Palpatine’s granddaughter, a decedent of the emperor. (This secret gets revealed now, or when they encounter Snoke later on.) He refuses to teach her. He explains his reluctance as he failed with Ben Solo. Luke doesn't consider killing Ben, instead Snoke has been influencing him to the dark side and as a display of his allegiance to the dark side, he along with the Knights of Ren, who were also students and Ben's allies, destroy Luke's Jedi academy.

Luke admits when he arrived at the old Jedi library, it had been ransacked. Most of the books are gone. Luke wishes to consult with the Jedi ghosts, but they have gone silent since Luke has abandoned the Jedi faith.

Leia gives Finn Rey's tracker beacon as she senses they share a close bond. Leia doesn't get sucked out into space and float back to the ship. Either she dies there or she isn't in the command room at that time. Finn locates a codebreaker within the rebel fleet and goes to the destroyer to stop the tracking device. Finn is their best chance since he used to work for the bad guys. Finn gives Rey's tracking beacon to Poe.

After Luke sees Leia’s image from R2-D2, he realizes he needs to take action and stop Snoke. Luke gives a crash course to Rey as they go to face Snoke and Kylo Ren. Luke uses his old green lightsaber and Rey uses the blue. Luke senses great strength in Rey. He senses light but also darkness. He warns her not to give into the darkness.

Snoke and Kylo Ren allow Luke and Rey on their ship to fight them. Snoke pulls out a purple lightsaber to reveal he was formerly Mace Windu (who was previously defeated by Emperor Palpatine). He survived the battle but is disfigured and bitter, turning to the dark side. We need to get Samuel Jackson to try and reproduce the voice used in the first movie or have some reason, like a mechanical voice box to explain the voice used in the previous movie. Windu stole the ancient Jedi books and learned how to extend his life. Part of the reason Kylo Ren joined him, was that Windu had this ancient Jedi knowledge, Luke did not.

Luke and Rey pull out their lightsabers. The other Knights of Ren are present in the throne room and join the party. An epic lightsaber battle occurs. Rey battles the Knights of Ren while Kylo and Windu fight Luke. Luke gets his mechanical hand cut off and rolls his eyes and says, “Again?”

Finn disables the tracking device and heads back to ship to escape. He is confronted with Captain Phasma. Just as he is about to be killed, Chewbacca and BB-8 save him.

The rebel ships slam into Snoke’s ship. It is driven by a robot and not Admiral Holdo, who goes to the planet with the rebel forces to escape. Snoke’s ship is disabled from pursuing the escaping rebels, but it is not destroyed.

Chewbacca carries an injured Finn away to safety. If you understood Wookie you would hear him say “Again?!” (Because Chewie carried Finn away when he was injured from the previous movie.) They escape off the crippled Snoke ship.

Luke does some heavy damage to Snoke. As Rey defeats the last of the Knights of Ren, she sees Luke about to get bested by Kylo. Luke explains to Kylo, “If you kill me in anger, I will always be with you, like your father.” Luke perishes.

When Snoke turns his attention to Rey, Kylo stabs him in the back with his lightsaber. Kylo explains he no longer has a use for him.

Kylo Ren turns to Rey and asks her to join him. They can rule the galaxy together. With a devious smile she reminds Kylo that she defeated him before. But then she says she needs to find her place in all of this and she thinks she has found it. She admits she can help track down the rebels (with the tracking beacon on her wrist). She reaches out to grasp Kylo's hand.

Fade Out.

[/spoiler]

Thanks for letting me get that off my chest.
Result in thread: My Youtube debut
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"My Youtube debut", 3rd May 2017, 12:41 AM #2
ChilPhil

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I made my Youtube debut in a Draw Fight competition. My mouth is very active when I draw (you'll have to watch the video to understand). Please consider voting for my version of Batman! Thanks, JP a.k.a. Chilphil

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Result in thread: How to comic faster
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12th Apr 2017, 3:38 PM #3
ChilPhil

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If possible place your dialogue down on the page first before drawing, or have a very good idea how much space the dialogue bubbles will take. There were pages I spent a lot of time drawing background details only to have it covered up with character dialogue.
Result in thread: Frequency of Updates
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12th Apr 2017, 12:55 PM #4
ChilPhil

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Consistent updates. A weekly schedule is good.

I understand your situation. It is tempting to place everything you have out there. I'm excited with some of my future updates and want to share it with my readers immediately. I have found a lot of benefits to keeping a buffer. Like you said, if you release everything there may be weeks before you replenish and it frees you up to put up a quality product. A buffer helps me when life gets too crazy/busy/hectic to work on my comic. Also, it allows me to work on other side projects as well.
Result in thread: hi, i'm new
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6th Apr 2017, 1:06 PM #5
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Hello ewolf20! Ah, you are going through the redo process. I've experienced it before. Wish you all the best on your comic endeavors!
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"Best-Webcomics.com site closed down", 24th Jan 2017, 1:48 PM #6
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It appears that Best-Webcomics.com site has ended it's run. I received their tweet, "My fellow webcomic friends, it is with regret to inform you that this is the end of Best Webcomics. We had a lot of fun setting this up but due to reasons beyond our control, we are not able to continue our work." I don't have more details beyond that.

I liked the site. It would occasionally spotlight my comic and I'd get a little bump in traffic or a new Twitter follower. I also had an interview regarding my webcomic posted there. I'd check out other webcomics they highlighted there.

Anyway, I wanted to share the news in case anyone out there don't see it functioning.
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17th Jan 2017, 1:57 PM #7
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Hi there. My Twitter handle is jphistudio.
There is a link in my signature.
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28th Dec 2016, 9:40 PM #8
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Good variations. They all look different to me.
Result in thread: Hoi~ I'm Me!
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17th Nov 2016, 1:31 PM #9
ChilPhil

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Welcome to CF!
May you make as many comics as your heart desires! :)
Result in thread: Hoi! I'm Temmie!
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13th Nov 2016, 1:08 PM #10
ChilPhil

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Welcome aboard!
Wishing you the best in your endevours.
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13th Oct 2016, 11:31 AM #11
ChilPhil

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@Bryant
Pat my back, because I read your post.
If I could, I'd pat your back too.
Life has given you so much tough stuff.
I just wanted to let you know I'm a fan of your comic, and I enjoy reading it.
I hope things turn around for you in your life.
Result in thread: New Here!
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22nd Sep 2016, 2:32 PM #12
ChilPhil

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Welcome kyrtuck!
I hope you have a great time here at Comicfury.

I drove up to Michigan earlier this month from Texas. I did some mountain biking and visited some folks, playing Texas Hold em. I also walked around Michigan State University campus, which is very beautiful.

Best wishes to you!
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13th Sep 2016, 7:45 PM #13
ChilPhil

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I think a description of what is allowed and not allowed in the specific forum, locked as the first post, much like other forum topics would be helpful.
Result in thread: Missed you guys!
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30th Aug 2016, 3:04 PM #14
ChilPhil

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It's so great seeing you back!
Dude, you got so many comics to catch up on. :)
Result in thread: Mateys
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22nd Aug 2016, 8:40 PM #15
ChilPhil

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Warning: This comic episode may cause drowsiness.
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Result in thread: Hi, I'm new :)
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8th Aug 2016, 4:52 PM #16
ChilPhil

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Greeting Olga!

It is so nice to have you join us. Ooo, 3D artist. What program do you use? I am just now trying to learn Blender. The learning curve is very steep. I love cycling but here in Houston, TX it is summer so it is way too hot this month. I have one wonderful dog.

I'll check out your comic soon.
JP
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25th Jul 2016, 3:15 PM #17
ChilPhil

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Hi Call Me Tom,

I followed your story the previous version and the reboot. I felt I had a grasp of the storyline and thought as the story progressed I'd learn more about the unique, different world you were creating.

The art for the comic was great. It fit the story.

There were times I wanted to quit or reboot my long story version webcomic. At times I took long breaks. Eventually, I finished the story. I look back and see a lot of changes I'd like to make to it but don't know if I ever will. The thought of redrawing previous pages doesn't excite me.

I can't say whether you should reboot, quit, or keep going. I can only say I enjoyed following your comic, and regard you as a talented artist.
Result in thread: Mateys
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22nd Jul 2016, 2:48 PM #18
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This guy learned you should always turn your library books on time.

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Result in thread: pictures of you
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20th Jun 2016, 5:55 PM #19
ChilPhil

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I met some fellow Houston ComicFurians at Comicpalooza 2016.

Pictured Left to right: Eagle99, myself and E-hero Vulven.

Image: http://mateys.webcomic.ws/files/comicpoolza_2016.jpg
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"Nice to see the return.", 7th Jun 2016, 3:23 PM #20
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This time around I want to submit Pete the pirate from Mateys.

Ono is ready to pass along his crown to this year's new 2016 champion.
Image: http://mateys.webcomic.ws/files/thanks.jpg
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