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11th May 2017, 2:38 PM #1
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8th May 2017, 6:12 AM #2
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Hello! I was wondering if you could critique my webcomic Virtrena and please do tell me suggestions on how to improve it. Thank you!
"Virtrena", 8th May 2017, 4:27 AM #3
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Hello! This is my first time being in the forums here. I've been running this webcomic for about three years (since 2014!) now and I figured that I could... shamelessly advertise here. So, my webcomic is titled Virtrena.

SYNOPSIS:
Virtrena -- considered as the "greatest video game of its time". Mixing the perfect balance between physical and virtual gameplay, players find themselves fighting against fellow players in virtual arenas. After a decade, Virtrena has already received worldwide support.

Meanwhile, a normal student, going by the name of Mark Gunnrow, is bullied by a Virtrena player. After having enough, Mark plans to avenge himself against his bully by joining Virtrena in order to humiliate him. For his 14th birthday, Mark's friends team up to support him with enough money to join the Games. With everything set, Mark and his friends set off to Veil City, where the Virtrena Gaming Grounds are built. Mark has yet to know the dangers and risks he will soon be facing against.

The genre is mainly action with a bit of sci-fi elements. As of writing, I have already uploaded 150+ pages.
This is a story me and a few friends from elementary made up, but ended up being turned into a serious project of mine. And since self-inserts are pretty common in those kinds of stories, I try to make fun of its tropes/justify it that actually fits the narrative. Also, it's my own twist on the virtual reality stories where, instead of the characters being inside a virtual world, the virtual world merges with the physical one via 6D Tech, which is an advanced form of holographic technology.

I do my best to update once a week, every Sunday. Hope you enjoy reading and even following the comic! Thank you for reading, hope you check it out!

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