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17th Nov 2013, 11:08 PM #1
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Faith:If you think something is slightly off, its probably because of all the white space you have, its a very large page but with very little actually filling it.
The page itself looks fine, just theres a lot of nothing going on in it.

I don't know if that's such a bad thing though. Limbo is usually a place in suspension. A place where the action dumps all its extraneous bits. So it's natural that it's a little boring. If that's what you're going for, I don't see a problem with the layout here.

The stick-figure skull looks interesting, though slightly off since the head is so much more detailed than the body. Then again, the background is also a mish-mash of different things, so why can't the denizens of Limbo be any different?

I just don't know what you're trying to convey, yokcos, so I can't tell if you're succeeding at it or not.
17th Nov 2013, 11:02 PM #2
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dpat57:Chiaka and John explore the sub-levels of Van Vorg's underground complex on Mars in MARS II... or, if you prefer to go further out into the depths of the Solar System... the Ganymede colonists engage the enemy in Space Pirates of the Black Quarter

The 3D models are interesting, but I'm not getting the "look" from Chiaka in Mars II. It looks more like she's at a loss for words, not death-glaring.

SPotBQ, by contrast, seems much more dynamic. But they're probably at different sections of their story. The author notes made me chuckle!


A college friend of mine amuses herself while cleaning in Sidework.
12th Sep 2013, 11:51 PM #3
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AlenaHarrold:So, this is my favorite page of my comic so far, more for the content than the art.

The Wolf at Weston Court

Ok, I like these guys already. And you should give yourself credit for the art! Solid, does its job... I was a little confused by the angle of the first panel initially but checking the previous page you led into it so I'm sure if I'd been reading it in order that wouldn't have been a problem.

My newest page is the 2nd half of a 2-parter so I highly suggest reading the previous one too to get the joke: Ad Therapy 2
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