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Yesterday, 6:53 PM #1
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Aaack XD thanks so much, I’m melting from these kind words <3
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Yesterday, 5:49 PM #2
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Idk how well a BB and S&B crossover would work, but I wanted to try Nia’s pretty art style, and these two force-field girls together! They’re talking about how differently they each make a force-field.

Kat: “No you’ve got it all wrong Sikue!! It can’t be that easy...”

Sikue: ...

Kat: “That’s just not fair. You’re too awesome!!”

EDIT: I also have ideas for more CF crossovers but we’ll see when I have time to do them
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Yesterday, 12:46 AM #3
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NiaNook:Haha, maybe some had a bit more time put into them :'D And nobody can handle Hoovy Woopins, really. He's too mighty.


Oh yeah



More like A++ for memes!! I’m dyin from laughter now
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2 days ago, 9:26 PM #4
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Some of these are too good to be considered doodles, at least compared to mine, lol! I can’t handle “Hoovy woopins” XD omg that’s fantastic—and hey, Kat said the same thing that Tatsuma said in a really early page
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2 days ago, 8:29 PM #5
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This new page was hard, but fun! Hopefully the experiments I’m doing with the colours when there’s action is effective...
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2 days ago, 8:26 PM #6
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Looks pretty intense...I like these kinds of scenes, they have a tendency to bring characters closer.

Um...Evan, what?!
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3 days ago, 1:26 PM #7
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Super Oliver:Well the same could be said to you because you go one step and beyond on being kind yourself Inks. :-)

(And thank you :-)~)

Merged Doublepost:



I'm feeling the SUPER power of cool! Coming from you I wonder what the scouter says on it's power level?...

Mmmmm...

What!?

I-IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!

:-)


Thanks man, this made my day!
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4 days ago, 11:07 PM #8
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Hopefully this is an encouraging pep-talk and not a useless ramble lol ; p

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5 days ago, 6:14 PM #9
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Sovember:Hahaha Kairo what happened bro XD


He’s just had it up to here with her back-talk or something B-D

Merged Doublepost:

BMR:Reworked Anna's head model. Used the old model as a base, and then did retopo on it all over again. Better topology this time around, and (somehow) only a few more vertices despite having far more edge loops.

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V1.5 has 1,296 vertices, while V2 has 1,419 vertices, so just a jump of just a little over a hundred vertices. Managed to keep vertex count down by removing unneeded stuff. For example, had far too many loops and vertices that didn't need them in her nose. Had tons of vertices there before, despite it not needing to move all that much.

After cutting down, I was able to add the loops that the previous version lacked. Previous version didn't have enough loops in the lips area to provide the level of expressiveness I need. Same with the eye and eyebrow region. Just wasn't enough the to allow for proper movement. V2 is better now, as I've got more loops there, so she can now emote better.

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That movement in the mouth area just wasn't possible with the previous version, and I would struggle to get her to have the expressions I needed. Now though, much easier and more fluid. Same with the eyelids and cheeks. Now to consider whether or not to retopo the other characters as well, heh.


This is far above me, wow :O
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5 days ago, 5:54 AM #10
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I’m in a stupid mood tonight
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5 days ago, 12:58 AM #11
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AshenBlaze:And now we have ShaRose49's "Sunstrike and Bluemist."

The Story:

So this one is kind of a mixed bag for me. I can see a lot of originality at play here, and clearly a lot of passion for the project too- however I do have a lot of problems with the writing in this comic.

The exposition is pretty rough... In previous reviews I explained how too little exposition could leave the reader confused, but here almost everything is explained to you. Too much so. There's a clear comparison to the X-Men series what with the mutants being segregated for being different. You've definitely put your own spin on it, which I like- but it's hard not to see the inspiration from other series. The random Japanese seems unnecessary. Sometimes they talk to each other in English, and other times they speak in Japanese. Didn't their mother leave before they could really be influenced by her? Is the father Japanese? If so that's not made clear either. It just seems a little strange to me. For the most part I'd work on showing rather than telling.

The Art:

I enjoy the neon 80's comic sort of vibe I get from this. It's fitting with the story and feels appropriate. Sometimes rather than a background you use a solid color, which I'm not a huge fan of- but usually it fits without feeling jarring or out of place. The designs also go with the style of the comic and feel like they belong in the universe. Most importantly, the art is fun and lively. It looks like it could be a Saturday morning cartoon. The panel composition is also executed in a consistent and clear way.

The Presentation:

Easy to navigate, though a bit simple. It doesn't really do anything to add or subtract from the comic.

Final Thoughts:

I can clearly see how much love is in this comic. But the walls of exposition really drew me out of the world. Sunstrike and Bluemist is a fun superhero romp, especially if you love the silver age of comics.


Thank you so much! Yeah I’ve learned a lot from critiques and research since I started, and like I said earlier I’m planning to completely rewrite the very beginning, making it much shorter and by showing rather than telling so much hopefully. (Ugh, I used to do so much info dumping!!) I should make it more clear that Evan is Japanese and Kat is half-Japanese though, thank you for that. And I’m really glad you got something entertaining from it, thanks again for reading!
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6 days ago, 10:59 PM #12
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Sovember:Going out to nature is a great idea. For me I think 90% of my inspiration is from music and maybe dreams, i get many ideas thanks to that crutch haha. Maybe explore a strange new genre and daydream about your characters story non linearly? before you know it you'll have too many batty ideas that you can piece together into a narrative... and not enough time to execute them (in my case) @_@.


Story of mah life :3
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6 days ago, 8:03 PM #13
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You can go ahead and review mine! The first chapter is not that great compared to the second though, I’m hoping to redraw/rewrite it when I’m finished part 1
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6 days ago, 4:19 AM #14
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Take my hand!!
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One week ago, 8:09 PM #15
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Things are about to escalate...also here’s a fake comic cover I made for my dad:

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One week ago, 8:05 PM #16
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Somebody looks pleased with themself! Kids are easy to impress...maybe that’s why I get along with them so well hehe!

Some teasers and Kat is getting impatient
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One week ago, 5:39 PM #18
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Bobblit:Well...

I'm obviously no expert or anything, but I'm under the impression that art blocks happen for a reason. In the past, every time I've felt "blocked", it turned out in the end that I was doing something wrong--usually trying to force myself into doing something that wasn't working for me, creatively speaking. Sometimes I even got really creative (hah!) trying to hide from myself that I was doing this, so the cause for my magical lack of inspiration was really hard to pinpoint. Sometimes I just needed to forget about everything for a while to sort of reset my expectations on myself, sometimes I had to do some actual (oh no) introspection.

But I'm not sure this is the case for everybody. Creativity is one of those things that seem to work very differently from person to person.

(Alternatively, you could also hit RUN.)


I agree with what this guy says—otherwise,maybe following a step-by-step tutorial in between projects for something you struggle with, or to refresh your memory? I think sometimes I get in a rut because I feel like I haven’t been drawing well.
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8 days ago, 6:24 AM #19
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Yeah the Donnie shirt seemed like something she would wear, haha.

Thanks, man! She looks awesome! I love what she’s doing with her powers!
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9 days ago, 6:25 PM #20
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Here ya go!
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