Result in thread: Comics to read!
13 days ago, 2:42 AM #1
Rus:On Here I Lie Awake::
First Look
Despite it's lack of color, it really doesn't need it. The art style gives you everything, nothing is all in your face, it's all collected within itself. I've experienced that heavy-yet-small feeling as well, but never for more than a few nights. I can't imagine bearing with it for 3 months.
Art Style
The shading is done with a blur, but it matches the style so well, everything looks so real but not in the creepy, terrifying way
I love the way the hair is done
This page looks so gooddddddd
I can't even draw one hand pwp
Story Line
Glad to see she has support! I wonder what that weighted feeling has come from though
Cold or fear?
God, I hate needles, but I think this is the best course of action, she definitely needs more than dental help, though
At least she has her arm still, but how did she see the severed limb?
The storyline is so intruging and terrifying, yet here I am making humour out of it.
Other
Maybe it's just me being ND, but I also do a repeating thing when I'm overwhelmed
The best way to describe what it's like to just.. need some help but not able to admit it
Stops at p.178
Final Look
It's been a wonderful comic to read, the contrasts of the blacks, whites, grays are done so well. I love it and suggest it, but there are a few sensitive subjects. I'll definitely take a look at your other comics, but only give my little list of critques for The Refraction Of Princess Chroma. I'm not doing so now since I have class and wish to get this out.
As for The Accidental Ninja-
I'm on a chromebook actually so that may be the cause of the size problem, it's always a little weird. And oo nice to know!
Despite it's lack of color, it really doesn't need it. The art style gives you everything, nothing is all in your face, it's all collected within itself. I've experienced that heavy-yet-small feeling as well, but never for more than a few nights. I can't imagine bearing with it for 3 months.
Art Style
The shading is done with a blur, but it matches the style so well, everything looks so real but not in the creepy, terrifying way
I love the way the hair is done
This page looks so gooddddddd
I can't even draw one hand pwp
Story Line
Glad to see she has support! I wonder what that weighted feeling has come from though
Cold or fear?
God, I hate needles, but I think this is the best course of action, she definitely needs more than dental help, though
At least she has her arm still, but how did she see the severed limb?
The storyline is so intruging and terrifying, yet here I am making humour out of it.
Other
Maybe it's just me being ND, but I also do a repeating thing when I'm overwhelmed
The best way to describe what it's like to just.. need some help but not able to admit it
Stops at p.178
Final Look
It's been a wonderful comic to read, the contrasts of the blacks, whites, grays are done so well. I love it and suggest it, but there are a few sensitive subjects. I'll definitely take a look at your other comics, but only give my little list of critques for The Refraction Of Princess Chroma. I'm not doing so now since I have class and wish to get this out.
As for The Accidental Ninja-
I'm on a chromebook actually so that may be the cause of the size problem, it's always a little weird. And oo nice to know!
You're too kind! I appreciate you checking out my work, and I'm happy to hear that certain aspects of the story resonate with you on a personal level.
Just to be clear, I didn't expect a review for both Here I Lie Awake AND Princess Chroma. You're welcome to read Princess Chroma at your leisure if you really, really want to, but it's over 500 pages and you already have your hands full with review requests, so please feel free to skip to the next person waiting.