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18th May 2017, 9:08 AM #1
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Lizuka:Little cluttered, but the page looks very nice and flows very well. I quite like your art style and it's a good display of action all around with very good structuring, very nice work all in all.

In Wright as Rayne, Glory tries for a quick finish and pays for it.


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Nice art style! I like your color choices, it fits the story very well. One thing I think you need to work on is how you frame the scene. For example the first, and last panel could have used a more dynamic camera angle. It'll definitely help the intensity of your scene.

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Tom's feeling a bit nervous as his rescue mission begins in this week's Heroes in Training!
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30th Apr 2017, 3:42 PM #2
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Something's missing, in today's Voidchild.

You have really good line art! The facial expressions on this page are really on point. I also like your color choices. They fit well with the tone of the story.

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Tom's gearing up for his first rescue mission in this week's Heroes in Training!
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7th Apr 2017, 4:35 AM #3
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Ok, let's not get too hasty xD. I just sent my first panel in, I told you I wouldn't miss it this time! :)
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6th Apr 2017, 8:55 AM #4
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No way I'm missing the deadline for the first panel this year. xD
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2nd Apr 2017, 4:39 AM #5
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Is it too late to sign up?
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2nd Apr 2017, 4:30 AM #6
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I loved the last one! You can definitely sign me up for this years!

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31st Jan 2017, 7:36 AM #7
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Could you draw King Savage? He's the guys being carried in the photo. xD I'm not sure if it's clear in the photo, but he has his hair tied into a ponytail, and the front end of his hair spikes up a little.

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19th Jan 2017, 1:44 PM #8
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19th Jan 2017, 1:43 PM #9
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You have really good art style! Your characters have nice, and vibrant colors. The dialogue is also well written. Overall, it's a really good page.

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It's a week late but here's page 12 of Heroes in Training! Looks like Tom's out of the frying pan, and into the fire.
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16th Jan 2017, 8:02 AM #10
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I was so close. TT_TT Why did there have to be so many projects due on one day xD.

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14th Jan 2017, 5:27 PM #11
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Speaking of superheroes, can Battle Boy, Nightwolf, and Freezer Burn join in on the fun? If it's too many characters, feel free to just pick one, or two out of the three of them. :) Best of luck to your new webcomic!

Battle Boy
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Nightwolf
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Freezer Burn
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P.S. If there are too many human characters. I have a monster that I could send you.
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9th Jan 2017, 9:16 AM #12
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He looks so cool! (Pun intended xD) Thanks! You have an awesome art style. I really like the cross-hatching. His facial expression is really spot on!
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8th Jan 2017, 4:52 AM #13
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How about Freezer Burn?
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Maybe in a pose like Genos is here:
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8th Jan 2017, 4:35 AM #14
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Wow! It's just been some hours, and we're already at page 3 of this thread xD!

I'm definitely joining! I've been waiting for this to come up since the last exchange!

I'm joining with my webcomic "Heroes in Training". It has no flags. I'm alright with only Violence, and Language Flags. I've recently done exchanges with Stumble, Serpents of Old, and Re:Set.

I'm so excited for this! I've already got some ideas of what I want to do!
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6th Jan 2017, 10:23 AM #15
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But it all goes wrong when he notices that Gene has five arms! "That's one too many!" Chika groggily exclaims in horror! Gene lunges at him, and reaches for a pair of...

(Next Person decides what the pair is.)
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2nd Jan 2017, 11:58 AM #16
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Thanks for the critique! I think you might have page 2 confused with page 3 though. Yeah, I was pressed for time on the 7th page so the action in it didn't come out the clearly. He's actually running the thief over with a shopping cart. I'll definitely work on better action shots, especially in my next few pages. When I finish my first issue, I'm definitely coming back here to ask for another critique.

By the way, do you also do critiques on characters? Like their designs, personalities, how they're written, and backstories?
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2nd Jan 2017, 11:37 AM #17
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ProRevo128:17


You're actually really close! I'm 16.

(Skip Me)
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29th Dec 2016, 7:41 PM #18
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27. Heroes in Training (Link in my Sig.)

Go easy on me on the first 3 pages (50% Sugar-coated, and 50% Truth), but once you reach page 4 and beyond give me about 30% Sugar-coated, and 70% Truth. Thanks in advance!
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29th Dec 2016, 7:32 PM #19
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22-25?
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29th Dec 2016, 7:29 PM #20
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Care to draw Alleycat? His color scheme's just shades of black, his eyes are brown, and his skin is tan.

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