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Nice art style! I like your color choices, it fits the story very well. One thing I think you need to work on is how you frame the scene. For example the first, and last panel could have used a more dynamic camera angle. It'll definitely help the intensity of your scene.

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Tom's feeling a bit nervous as his rescue mission begins in this week's Heroes in Training!

Something's missing, in today's Voidchild.

You have really good line art! The facial expressions on this page are really on point. I also like your color choices. They fit well with the tone of the story.

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Tom's gearing up for his first rescue mission in this week's Heroes in Training!

Ok, let's not get too hasty xD. I just sent my first panel in, I told you I wouldn't miss it this time! :)

No way I'm missing the deadline for the first panel this year. xD

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Could you draw King Savage? He's the guys being carried in the photo. xD I'm not sure if it's clear in the photo, but he has his hair tied into a ponytail, and the front end of his hair spikes up a little.

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You have really good art style! Your characters have nice, and vibrant colors. The dialogue is also well written. Overall, it's a really good page.

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It's a week late but here's page 12 of Heroes in Training! Looks like Tom's out of the frying pan, and into the fire.

I was so close. TT_TT Why did there have to be so many projects due on one day xD.

W.I.P of Page 12 without Speech Bubbles:

Speaking of superheroes, can Battle Boy, Nightwolf, and Freezer Burn join in on the fun? If it's too many characters, feel free to just pick one, or two out of the three of them. :) Best of luck to your new webcomic!

Battle Boy


Nightwolf


Freezer Burn


P.S. If there are too many human characters. I have a monster that I could send you.

He looks so cool! (Pun intended xD) Thanks! You have an awesome art style. I really like the cross-hatching. His facial expression is really spot on!

How about Freezer Burn?


Maybe in a pose like Genos is here:

Wow! It's just been some hours, and we're already at page 3 of this thread xD!

I'm definitely joining! I've been waiting for this to come up since the last exchange!

I'm joining with my webcomic "Heroes in Training". It has no flags. I'm alright with only Violence, and Language Flags. I've recently done exchanges with Stumble, Serpents of Old, and Re:Set.

I'm so excited for this! I've already got some ideas of what I want to do!

But it all goes wrong when he notices that Gene has five arms! "That's one too many!" Chika groggily exclaims in horror! Gene lunges at him, and reaches for a pair of...

(Next Person decides what the pair is.)

Thanks for the critique! I think you might have page 2 confused with page 3 though. Yeah, I was pressed for time on the 7th page so the action in it didn't come out the clearly. He's actually running the thief over with a shopping cart. I'll definitely work on better action shots, especially in my next few pages. When I finish my first issue, I'm definitely coming back here to ask for another critique.

By the way, do you also do critiques on characters? Like their designs, personalities, how they're written, and backstories?

You're actually really close! I'm 16.

(Skip Me)

27. Heroes in Training (Link in my Sig.)

Go easy on me on the first 3 pages (50% Sugar-coated, and 50% Truth), but once you reach page 4 and beyond give me about 30% Sugar-coated, and 70% Truth. Thanks in advance!

22-25?

Care to draw Alleycat? His color scheme's just shades of black, his eyes are brown, and his skin is tan.