Lizuka:Little cluttered, but the page looks very nice and flows very well. I quite like your art style and it's a good display of action all around with very good structuring, very nice work all in all.
Nice art style! I like your color choices, it fits the story very well. One thing I think you need to work on is how you frame the scene. For example the first, and last panel could have used a more dynamic camera angle. It'll definitely help the intensity of your scene.
Could you draw King Savage? He's the guys being carried in the photo. xD I'm not sure if it's clear in the photo, but he has his hair tied into a ponytail, and the front end of his hair spikes up a little.
Speaking of superheroes, can Battle Boy, Nightwolf, and Freezer Burn join in on the fun? If it's too many characters, feel free to just pick one, or two out of the three of them. :) Best of luck to your new webcomic!
Thanks for the critique! I think you might have page 2 confused with page 3 though. Yeah, I was pressed for time on the 7th page so the action in it didn't come out the clearly. He's actually running the thief over with a shopping cart. I'll definitely work on better action shots, especially in my next few pages. When I finish my first issue, I'm definitely coming back here to ask for another critique.
By the way, do you also do critiques on characters? Like their designs, personalities, how they're written, and backstories?
_______________________ "With Great Power there must also come Great Responsibility." - Unnamed Narrator. Amazing Fantasy #15.