Robin Banks tries to regain control of there situation but makes one major mistake, she took her eyes off the guy with the stick!Robin Banks tries to regain control of there situation but makes one major mistake, she took her eyes off the guy with the stick! Click Here to read it now!
My latest page is a "getting the characters from point A to point B" page, and could have probably been done without dialogue, but since the panel layout is somewhat unconventional, I chose to add dialogue so that the word balloons could lead the reader's eye around the page.
I do think some of the wording on this page is maybe a little much, feels kind of clunky in places, but on the whole this is pretty good. The art looks nice, it flows well, and the shots have some interesting, varied framing. On the whole I'd say this is pretty good work.
Could be me reading too deeply into this scene, but, I almost feel this sense of foreboding, like a big, 'however...' secrets can be deadly too. I think your art work is getting tighter, cleaner MK. It shows. :)