I reeeeeeally like the color work on the page. All tones work very well in combination, and fir the art style. The only thing I can really nitpick on - I'm not sure the "Squeeze" effect marker is well fitted with the rest of the composition. Work on emotions is pretty exquisit, especially with simple models, and additional plus is high level execution of colouring an lineart on technical level.
Pretty good stuff here, though I can think of some criticisms; the characters look out of place compared to the backgrounds, mostly in that the lines on them seem a little more formless by comparison. They don't look bad, but if you're looking for an area to improve I'd probably focus on tightening that up because the backgrounds are pretty good - maybe a little overly heavy on the gradient in spots but on the whole, good stuff. Particularly solid work for the comic being as early in as it is.
In Wright as Rayne's filler arc, Alex and Daryl's gender conversation continues.
Suggestion: having this amount of text with next to nothing happening and so little panels can be grating. You could make the conversation more inretesting by adding more panels and changing the angles with them.
I love the stained glass style and all the expressions and implied situations you gave to the characters! I'd just advise to make the lines on the text a tiny bit thicker (maybe with 1px stroke?), it's a bit hard to read.