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18th Dec 2013, 1:33 PM #3761
Matt Knab

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Very nice inks, love the detail and texture that you put into every panel. Keep up the good work!

Today, in an early day page of Twilight Trust, things are getting tense.
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18th Dec 2013, 2:04 PM #3762
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Matt, tense work. Especially like the 5th panel. The script is really good. The dialogue flows really well. I read it in my head, gave emphasis where it's bold, paused for dramatic tension. Great script work.

In TAOMAM the guy from HR comes to bug Mike and he quickly realises he might just be a Jedi...
18th Dec 2013, 2:09 PM #3763
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marcuscoolius:Matt, tense work. Especially like the 5th panel. The script is really good. The dialogue flows really well. I read it in my head, gave emphasis where it's bold, paused for dramatic tension. Great script work.

In TAOMAM the guy from HR comes to bug Mike and he quickly realises he might just be a Jedi...


A Jedi or Bugs Bunny :P.

The character designs are amusing, but a little more dynamism from panel to panel would be good. There's almost no motion.

In the latest Eclipse Legend, Bill is getting the team out of there...

http://eclipselegend.thecomicseries.com/comics/121
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18th Dec 2013, 2:41 PM #3764
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@Eclipse Legend - I like the expressions and the lighting on this page. I'd have to read back a bit to figure out what's going on but the mood and the dialogue work well. Aside from some anatomy proportion issues with the arms in the first, third and fifth frames, the art is good and I like the variations in skin color.

Super Chibi Girl - a fan art from LeRenardRoux!
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18th Dec 2013, 2:54 PM #3765
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jas:Super Chibi Girl - a fan art from LeRenardRoux!


Ha ha, it made me laugh when I noticed that the parents were smaller than the daughter. I tell you, the jumper saying "Dawn's Mom" was definitely needed, as it allowed me to actually get the joke in its entirety, without guessing.

The artstyle is pretty good as well. Simple backgrounds that bring the characters to focus, and fingerless hands due to what I'm guessing is an inability to draw hand properly, I do the exact same thing with the hands but I think you've done a much better job at pulling if off than me. Very nice, very good work!

This week on 20 Quid Amusements, we get to see what lurks inside the sofa!
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18th Dec 2013, 6:02 PM #3766
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Ha! Love it. That explains so many things. I assume the single-sock-stealing gnome is somewhere in there too. And the tile-tripping gnome. (You know . . . the guy that pushes up the floor tiles slightly to make you trip on what is otherwise a perfectly flat floor?) Might want to lighten the green of the sofa a tad since it blends in with the pants.

Anyway, Issue #8 of Fusion draws to a close this week (link in sig).
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18th Dec 2013, 9:18 PM #3767
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EssayBee:Issue #8 of Fusion draws to a close this week (link in sig).


I'm still trying to figure out if it's just me, or is he pointing that camera at her chest?

Either way, I giggled for like a minute solid.

Today in My Mediocre Mind, I managed to finish the comic without throwing my desk out a window!

Seriously though, I'm terrible with coloring. Terrible.
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18th Dec 2013, 9:40 PM #3768
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RE: Mediocre mind

I like the cartooniness of the designs and the colors are really nice. Maybe I'd say try to get a little more construction into the characters cause they seem a little flat to me. I did enjoy the writing though. Seems very clever.

Making of -- 3
19th Dec 2013, 2:27 AM #3769
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I’m not exactly sure what is going on here, but the art work looks very good and the dialog is entertaining even if the story seems to be about the people creating the story.


DAR-VAL…PAGE 19. BLICK-BLICK HAS A MISSION OF PAIN.


19th Dec 2013, 3:08 AM #3770
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This is some awesome shading and detail. My only gripe are those columns in that last panel; they just don't fit in well with that floor.

Bass Cannon: > Explore to find the rift
The team goes out to find the rift, but it gets dark out. So, naturally, they come back to their house for lodging.(?)
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19th Dec 2013, 5:39 PM #3771
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Zextillion- its always nice seeing this style of webcomic (I forgot the name). I would suggest cleaning up the scraggily lines a bit, it looks rather unpolished and can be difficult to tell exactly what I'm looking at, the persons face in panel 2.

for Isonacia today, falling.
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19th Dec 2013, 8:11 PM #3772
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Nice shading! I'm a bit confused as to what's going on in the last panel, though. Who is this mysterious observer, and what is that unidentified lump of flesh in the lefthand corner?

In the latest Awkward Paws, the band feels the need to branch out from their obviously overdone genre, and we embark on the beginning of a plotline!
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19th Dec 2013, 8:19 PM #3773
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RE: Awkward Paws

Ok, I have no real issues with the artwork. The colors, expressions, character designs, all look good. I've never been a fan of oval-shaped speech bubbles though. I think they look a little awkward (no pun intended).

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19th Dec 2013, 8:32 PM #3774
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Interesting "behind the scenes" look at the creative process. :)

Today on Twilight Trust, the tense debrief continues.
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19th Dec 2013, 9:45 PM #3775
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Nice page, hopefully we get some revealing info now.

Today's Chickpeas gives out some important holiday shopping tips.

Chickpeascomic.com
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19th Dec 2013, 10:36 PM #3776
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UltimateB:Nice page, hopefully we get some revealing info now.

Today's Chickpeas gives out some important holiday shopping tips.

Chickpeascomic.com


Your art is adorable. I love the manic intensity of the last panel.

http://eclipselegend.thecomicseries.com/comics/122

On today's Eclipse Legend, Bill's attempt at freeing Meteor runs into some complications...
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19th Dec 2013, 10:51 PM #3777
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@Eclipse Legend - Another interesting (in a good way) page. Nice subdued lighting and colors. The dialogue gets a little melodramatic but it's understandable with their circumstances.

And there's just something creepy about being surrounded by a bunch of gun-wielding young white dudes in red capes with smiles on their faces. It's the cult of college boys! XD

Good page, really. I enjoyed it.

Super Chibi Girl - I played around with drawing the SCG characters in different artists' styles.
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19th Dec 2013, 10:54 PM #3778
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Re: Super Chibi Girl

Sometimes the rough sketches of a strip are as interesting to look at as the main body of work. Something like this show off the latent talents of the artist, which normally would not be on display.
To be honest, I'm not at all familiar with the styles of other artists on display; so I'm looking more at pen work and line weights and I must say that I'm impressed.
"Anarcha Style" makes use of the fact and proves that a few well placed texture lines add depth to a picture.

I'm deeply confused by the title of the whole strip though "Super Chibi Girl". ちび (chibi) means "short person" which also can stray into the realm of SD; neither of those appear to be in the 63 strips... except Jeff nand he's not a girl.

This is officially strip 450 of This Is Douglas:
http://thisisdouglas.webcomic.ws/comics/450
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20th Dec 2013, 2:22 PM #3779
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Rollo, I'm sorry but I can't find your comic...at all. o.O I'll comment on it on this post as soon as you make it available. (Strange)

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Sandbox Drama: Wake up I tried some new technics on this one :)

Edit: Hythlodeus, you might also ask why she coughs then? It's hard to explain, but I'll try. She's a personification of a leaf, and if you follow the story from the beginning a lot of the things make a lil more sense :) so please, come read it *luring innocent readers shamelessly*
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20th Dec 2013, 4:40 PM #3780
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@spitfire: outstanding colouring and the water effect is fantastic. although I'm a little confused how that character was able to speak without any mouth. (her nipples are also missing but she seems to be kinda alien, so who knows, maybe the nipples are somewhere else) :D

Zwerg/Elf continues a very long fight scene
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