In the first panel, the shading looks a bit like your character has a chin beard. Maybe try to experiment with different angles and areas when doing shading? And I'm not really sure about the perspective and proportions in the second panel, in the sense that I can tell they're off the ground but I'm not sure how close or far away they are.
That said, your characters look very unique, their expressions are well done and the mohawk-guy is making me lol. Well done and keep it up. =)
Cool and interesting concepts. And this art style is pretty nice. Digital, but looks really fluid, and good use of black and whites, though I personally would prefer a little less contrast, but again, that's just me. It still looks good, regardless.
And the characters' dialogue flows nicely.
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You have an awesome comic Amphurious01! The Art Style is great, the writing feels natural, and I like the designs of the characters and the Kreaturez. You also did a great job of showing the characters' personalities through their dialouge. I'm definitely going to read more of it later!
Hey! I really like this newbie crime fighter's attitude as he tries to catch the purse snatcher! Your color is cool and the figures are very active, I like the hit the purse snatcher lands on him with the purse itself! Good comedy.