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7th Jun 2016, 5:54 AM #12481
Hammy

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I like the subtlety of these kinds of pages. It fits nicely with the preceding pages as well.

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Holly turns 17 and get's a fitting present from her sister.
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7th Jun 2016, 10:04 AM #12482
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Pretty funny, and surely true. Teenagers often act like that ^^

Here is my new page, and with a twist. I offer my readers to decide what kind of gear our characters are going to wear for an upcoming epic gladiator battle

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7th Jun 2016, 6:26 PM #12483
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The art looks like Akira Toriyama's works and that's very appealing towards me, also love the colors which look very vibrant.
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7th Jun 2016, 8:04 PM #12484
Atsuuikakura
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JDDishmon:The art looks like Akira Toriyama's works and that's very appealing towards me, also love the colors which look very vibrant.
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On this week's Nexgen, our hero goes in for the win while the Oni does a sore loser move while monologues his reasons


I think you should try to put some time into making the explosions look more detiled. The buildings arent bad but the
lines are wavey, maybe try using a straight edged when making those.

On parasite Galaxy Mac has a close encounter with mr couch

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7th Jun 2016, 11:42 PM #12485
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An amusing Twilight Zone parody.

On page 4-5 of Battle Kreaturez, Dennis reassures Kristy.
8th Jun 2016, 12:18 AM #12486
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First time in Battle Kreaturez.

Now, I want to see the creatures. In the meantime, Kristy being central panel is cool so I get this page is about her. She shows a wide range of emotions. I have to say this is a nice hook to possibly go and read the archives.

Now, this is page 7 of M9 Girls' Chapter 5. The Girls are dragged heads-on into fight!

Enjoy!
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8th Jun 2016, 1:35 AM #12487
keltyzoid!
Unless something better's on TV!
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i'm gonna edit this with a comment for the above in a sec ;0

so commenting on M9 Girls, there's not really much to comment on. i don't really know the context of the scene, and i went back a few pages to try and figure it out, but i stopped when i realized how far into the story it currently is. the lack of distinct backgrounds makes the foreground dull and the linework is kind of messy, plus the 4 protagonists all look generally the same aside from the clothes they're wearing. the action at least was fairly fluid and i liked the facial expressions.

Nightlight updated and shit's hitting the fan now
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8th Jun 2016, 12:52 PM #12488
Damatris
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Dayum Kelty! It has been ages since I last checked Nightlight but your pages sure have improved a lot since then! Everything is looking really crisp and nice. One thing I'd suggest is adding shading to backgrounds too. It looks a bit strange that people or furniture aren't casting any shadows, considering characters themselves are shaded. Also, people's body languages here are really good. Poor James tho... His hopes are promptly dashed after meeting people who can actually spot when someone isn't a human.

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In Fallacy there is a warning for getting wrinkles.
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8th Jun 2016, 12:52 PM #12489
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Ack! I posted about Nightlight but Damatris beat me to it. Now to amend my comment about her page of Fallacy.

I truly dig the artwork. Especially the coloring. It has a great watercolored feel to it. If I saw a print edition of this strip at a con, I would pick it up. I scrolled though and was just amazed at the evolution of your style. The artistic growth on display is quite impressive.

This time in Jesus 2016, it's Jesus vs. Jesus in The Other Man in the Mirror
8th Jun 2016, 7:38 PM #12490
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Wow, a lot of big issues being thrown around here. True Jesus vs Jesus, jesus.

Dedicating this page to my pup.
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8th Jun 2016, 10:51 PM #12491
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Kepperboy:Wow, a lot of big issues being thrown around here. True Jesus vs Jesus, jesus.

Dedicating this page to my pup.
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Nice Noir feel. Crisp line work. I just subscribed.

Here is my baby--->Jobber Webcomic
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9th Jun 2016, 3:08 AM #12492
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I really like the detail of the monster and the main characters look really cool. I dig the different personalities and some of the snarky comments. Even the design of the outfits really works and reflects the characters personalities pretty well. Keep 'em coming.

And now a new The Dreamcatcher
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9th Jun 2016, 5:00 AM #12493
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Neat black and white look! The lineart is a bit too rough, tho.

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Today's KOKO: Koko's viewpoint gets magnified.
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9th Jun 2016, 8:16 AM #12494
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xD, that was really funny. You have a really good art style, and your comic looks very interesting. You also did a really good job on the cross-hatching and shading!

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The Mall Cops have finally come, but it looks like Battle Boy's also in trouble!
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9th Jun 2016, 3:03 PM #12495
rawdale

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The artwork is fine, but your word balloons aren't so great. You have the words going up against the walls of those words balloons and that's a big no-no. I would also look into creating the word balloons digitally instead of inking them before hand and hoping the they're big enough to contain the text-if that is what happened.

And please, DO NOT USE COMIC SANS for your font. Go shopping on Blambot or DaFont for better fonts. You can get some really great ones for free.
Comic Sans is one of the most hated fonts out there by artists ever.


Here is a little strip I did for everyone who is underwhelmed by our choices in November. A little therapeutic humor to help them process.
I call it...Apokolips Now 2016
9th Jun 2016, 4:24 PM #12496
Lackinganame

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Excellent! Really everyone should read this!

This week is the end of Exaltation and the Solace Trilogy. The Light A new world Exaltaton: The End
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10th Jun 2016, 12:32 AM #12497
Shannon

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Wow... I like the atmosphere you set up. Really feels like the end of a story and the start of another. And your poems are nice, too.

On "Zack Dragonblade and the Excalites", Chapter 5 begins!
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10th Jun 2016, 9:48 AM #12498
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Well, there's not a lot happening since it's the chapter cover, but I found the phrase "Insecurity Strike!" very funny. (It sounds like it's a move in a combat game. "Enemy used Insecurity Strike! POF! FLOOSH! KABOOOOOM!" xD)

Apart from that, the character looks... sleepy? I also like the wolf (I hope it's a wolf and not a dog, it's always difficult to tell in cartoons) a lot; it manages to look stylized, menacing and cute all at the same time.

Today on A Tale Yet Unclaimed, reality-induced chaos takes over!
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10th Jun 2016, 2:49 PM #12499
Atsuuikakura
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Bobblit:Well, there's not a lot happening since it's the chapter cover, but I found the phrase "Insecurity Strike!" very funny. (It sounds like it's a move in a combat game. "Enemy used Insecurity Strike! POF! FLOOSH! KABOOOOOM!" xD)

Apart from that, the character looks... sleepy? I also like the wolf (I hope it's a wolf and not a dog, it's always difficult to tell in cartoons) a lot; it manages to look stylized, menacing and cute all at the same time.

Today on A Tale Yet Unclaimed, reality-induced chaos takes over!


I don't know if those are marshmallow people,but they look delicious!I had a little trouble figuring out what the purple stuff was for a moment but I'm thinking thats lab explosion gas

On parasite galaxy Mac has more couch problems http://parasitegalaxy.webcomic.ws/comics/328
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10th Jun 2016, 7:21 PM #12500
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Couches on planes, oh god. At first I thought it was just a ogre butt against the window.

Why can't I hold all these chins!?
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