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"I need something to force me to read comics- so, critiques?", 10th Jan 2017, 12:26 AM #1
Nyomi♀
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"But, Nyomi! You could just read them through! Why do you need to critique them as you go?"
Because I never finish anything without some sort of pressure.

Oh yeah, you heard it here first! Critiques from the coolest person this side of the nutshack!

I tend to be pretty honest, but feel free to tell me if you want me to lean more towards the sugar or the spice side. Just tell me your intensity rating on a scale of "pure sugar" to "California Reaper Concentrated Bottle Sauce."

Oh, and large archives don't bother me, but I may get to the shorter ones first- I need to have a little more time to read through those.

I won't limit sign-ups, but just note that exams are next week and there might be a break between this weekend and the weekend after where I don't do any.


Is this going to go well? I have no idea. I just wanna read some comics that I might have missed/haven't gotten to, haha. :P

also im slightly hungry can you tell

1.The Ward- spicy sweet chili
2.Imp- Basically? my default.
3.Gilded Eyes- as spicy as I want (will update when I read)
4.Swordcat Princess- as spicy as I want (will update when I finish reading)
5.Metallic- a chinese cuisene (wish i liked chinese food)
6.Everett- said nothing, so goin as spicy as I want (but probably my default)
7.Those Days so Long Ago- A straight up roast up in here.
8.Fatebound- spiciness to be updated.
9.I'm Not Your Friend- spiciness TBA
10. I dislike u - ^
11. The Trapper Lad
12. Mallory Bash
13. The Sunless Child- California Reaper sauce
14. Mindfold
15. Fantomah Rising
16. Blessed and Cursed
17. Bound by Blood
18. Stumble
19. Exiern
20. SGKDR
21. Mundane Maria
22. Mr. Torchy's comic (too lazy to check name right now)
23. TAOQG&GF
24. Wyrecat

theres so many

Merged Doublepost:

also yes i never finished the last time i requested for characters to draw but
i promise ive learned my lesson
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10th Jan 2017, 12:37 AM #2
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Can you do mine? The scale: How about.... the sweet chili sauces that you get when you order nachos?
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10th Jan 2017, 12:52 AM #3
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Could you do Imp if you get the chance?

I kind of just want an honest opinion, but maybe just a tad of sugar so I don't get scared out of seeking critique for good.
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10th Jan 2017, 12:53 AM #4
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ohhh it's always useful to hear a critique !
unfortunately my current version here on CF is a hot mess but I have a better version on tapastic. I can't update CF yet for continuity purposes. I'd love to hear feedback. Be as mean as you want.

and oh lord i too have learned my lesson on those character drawing request threads xD
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10th Jan 2017, 1:04 AM #5
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I could always use another critique to aide in my perpetual retroactive editing...

SwordCat Princess


How salty/sugary/savory/melty is up to you.
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10th Jan 2017, 1:04 AM #6
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Duh... Not too sugary, but also not too spicy. A chinese cuisine. Link within signature. Albeit lots of things are becoming rather fast outdated, so maybe also tell how well I am improving if improving at all. Recommend digested in small doses, chapter a time. Also last page of latest chapter comes out friday 13th, which is this week...
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10th Jan 2017, 1:06 AM #7
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If you wanna read Everett, be my guest.
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10th Jan 2017, 1:11 AM #8
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Drown 'Those Days so Long Ago' in California Reaper Concentrated Bottle Sauce, please.

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10th Jan 2017, 1:12 AM #9
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I would love if you could get around to Fatebound (link below). You're the chef here, I'll let you decide what flavor is most suitable.
10th Jan 2017, 1:49 AM #10
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Alright! I wasn't ignoring you guys, I needed to get homework done and locked myself out of my account. ...And then went on incognito mode to read The Ward.
In light of this stack of homework I completely forgot I had, the first one will be up either later tonight or, more likely, tomorrow! It'll probably be The Ward, but besides this I'll probably check the pages and go based on what I feel like reading. Or RNG it like Bold, if nothing else.
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10th Jan 2017, 4:57 AM #11
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If it's not too late, I'd like to request my comic be critiqued
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10th Jan 2017, 11:28 PM #12
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Alright, first up is The Ward!



Anyway, Imp is next up! :D I'll get that out soon!
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11th Jan 2017, 12:21 AM #13
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I want as many critiques as possible so please critique I Dislike U by Dylan D....(me) and this isn't shameless advertising so just search it. Thanks!
11th Jan 2017, 12:27 AM #14
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If it's a critique thread, its more than acceptable to link your comic- really, it's appreciated.
I mean it's not like your comic's hard to find or anything, but for the future most people like being linked to it.
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11th Jan 2017, 12:41 AM #15
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If you get around to it, I'd love some reactions to the Trapper Lad!

I don't think anyone has critiqued it yet, so you'd be the first!
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11th Jan 2017, 12:54 AM #16
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Oh man, Leafa, I just checked it out to see how long it was, and when I saw it was only 15 pages I had to read it right then! Especially since I'd literally just finished the Art of Monsters.

I'm a bit afraid I don't have anything helpful critique-wise to say! I think it's lovely all around. The way you tell stories is something I admire- I sort of lack the ability to tell short stories, and the way you go about it is pretty amazing. I can also appreciate how you change your style to fit the tone of the story- and in particular the way you colored it gives it an amazing old-timey vibe I admire, and the watercolor backgrounds are... wow when they happen. The characters are likable- I was rooting for the kid all the way through, and I think that's always a good thing.

Overall, I really enjoyed it! I'm gonna need to check out the rest of your work later! :)
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11th Jan 2017, 2:53 AM #17
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I've been whoring my comic out for critiques a lot lately. It's been pretty useful so far, so here goes another! Check out Mallory Bash and give it to me straight.
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11th Jan 2017, 3:04 AM #18
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ah could you critique my comic called the sunless children and I would love a rating of California Reaper Concentrated Bottle Sauce pls!
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11th Jan 2017, 3:08 AM #19
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I would love to hear your thoughts on my comic, Mindfold. Be as spicy and nit-picky as you like.
11th Jan 2017, 3:12 AM #20
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How about Fantomah Rising please? Honest please. You don't have to hurt yourself being nice. Link below.
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