"[Me]: "Just fuck my shit up fam." || [Comic Fury]: "Say no more." ⌈Critique Tweezen Please⌋", 11th Aug 2017, 8:36 PM #1
in the BIG CITY
in the BIG CITY
Registration date: 18th Oct 2016
Location: Queens, NYC
My Webcomic: http://tweezen.com
There's been so many critique threads going around lately and I've been missing the cut off on all of them. I've never wanted to get critique before because Tweezen is my baby and I already know it's not perfect, but admittedly seeing all those critiques did start the itch on wanting to know what people think of my comic so here I am with this thread. It's like not wanting to jump into the cold pool but seeing so many others doing it made me realize it might not be so bad.
I wanted to get a chapter out the way before I made this thread, but I figure 14 pages is enough for someone to know how they feel about it so I'm jumping the gun on this. In addition, I also wanna know your opinion on the site itself. I made sure the site was as accessible as possible, I wanted to make sure people could go anywhere they want with minimal clicking. That's why I made sure the nav buttons were on both sides of the page, as well as manually putting in the archive dropdown. Also is it easy on the eyes? Do you like the color choices?
As a disclaimer, I realize there's some inconsistencies right now with the art and I plan to clean them up later. So if a character isn't wearing an article of clothing the same way he did in an earlier page, I know that and just haven't gotten around to it yet. I liked some design choices later and rather than stay consistent with something I didn't like, I just went for it and decided to retroactively change it later.
Also I want to go with lowercase font, but can't afford the font I want yet, and can't find a free alternative to it just yet. CC Wild Words Lower. ;~;
One last thing with the shading, I have no idea how to shade and just have been winging it the whole time. Someone put me on to vector shading by the time I got to like.. page 10 or so and have been going with that since. I wanted to go back and reshade the former pages, but lost all the Photoshop documents of every page before 13 so sad days there. I just gotta take the L on those pages. Gotta admit, it's why I haven't been rushing to "fix" the earlier pages.
Outside of those though, everything else is fair game. What do you like? Don't like? Just fuck my day up, no hard feelings. If you feel like pulling any punches, someone already told me my comic gave them cancer so you can't do any worse than that guy. If I disagree with something or want to explain myself, I reserve the right to do so, but it'll be totally professional; I won't get butthurt and won't take anything personally. I recognize that I'm willingly putting myself in this position.
Thanks in advance to any and all who review this.
Tweezen: Light of the Shadow || Genre: Fantasy/Action/Adventure