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"i don't know what webcomics are so let me read yours", 18th Oct 2017, 1:03 PM #1
Audrea
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i'll review your webcomic with the following caveats

1. i don't know what webcomics are
2. i'll read like maybe five pages

if these restrictions seem fine to you then drop a link and i'll critique it
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18th Oct 2017, 1:28 PM #2
fedoramoron

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wow you meet all my standards??!???!?!??? thanks my duude
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18th Oct 2017, 1:36 PM #3
Audrea
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i started at 80 because 80 is a nice number

i like your art and the coloured text in the speech bubbles is nice

the dialogue is kinda offbeat and ridiculous, i really like it

sometimes it's a little hard to see the text when it hasn't got a bubble behind it, probably because of the colours. i don't have a good solution for this but i guess it doesn't matter

anyway i actually love it? congratulations on being my first and only subscription
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18th Oct 2017, 1:40 PM #4
fedoramoron

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wowowow good & great thank u!!!
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18th Oct 2017, 1:51 PM #5
halibabica
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Are you sure you don't know what a webcomic is? I'm not sure you're sure...
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18th Oct 2017, 2:21 PM #6
monkeyking
did not write shakespeare, but dope webcomics
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you dont need to know what a webcomic is with mine. It's just adult swim steven universe..,
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18th Oct 2017, 3:53 PM #7
kyrinthekid

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Seems like fun Dat comic
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18th Oct 2017, 4:06 PM #8
ZeroGee
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I dont know what you can get from 5 pages but go for it. :)
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18th Oct 2017, 4:43 PM #9
Van Husk I
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18th Oct 2017, 4:50 PM #10
jamiethefierce

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Audrea:i'll review your webcomic with the following caveats

1. i don't know what webcomics are
2. i'll read like maybe five pages

if these restrictions seem fine to you then drop a link and i'll critique it


I don't feel that well to share mine as I can't take criticism well but here it is:
http://melancholydisdain.thecomicseries.com
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18th Oct 2017, 5:07 PM #11
MK_Wizard

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I invite you to mine. Just click the banner in my signature, friend.
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18th Oct 2017, 5:12 PM #12
Sikyanakotik

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Judging from my format, you'd probably guess that I don't know what a webcomic is either.

todaysclient.thecomicseries.com

There's not much I can do to change things at this point, since I'm mostly trying to preserve a story I started writing elsewhere two years ago. That said, honest feedback is always welcome, and I promise not to get defensive. Please be brutal.
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18th Oct 2017, 11:49 PM #13
Audrea
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monkeyking:you dont need to know what a webcomic is with mine. It's just adult swim steven universe..,

i don't know what adult swim is and i don't know what steven universe is

started at page 25

i like the art, the text looks kinda stretched which i assume is because of the font

looks kinda flat? particularly in the darker scenes, though i guess that's a stylistic choice. it definitely looks better when it's bright light

i like the panel composition and it all seems to flow pretty well
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21st Oct 2017, 2:42 AM #14
Lee M

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I agree with ZeroGee that five pages isn't much to go on, but feel free to take a look at Storm Over Whoomera. There's some nudity and mildish violence in the form of disintegration.
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21st Oct 2017, 5:53 AM #15
DrFurball

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Wanna give Weird in a Can a shot?
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"Any On Of Us", 30th Oct 2017, 4:11 AM #16
killianmckellen

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Just got the first issue up of our comic. Would love some feed back if you have the time. Can't figure out how to upload a picture on here lol.
Any ways its a Noir comic, with a female antihero. It centers around a clandestine human trafficking organization, and its down fall. Lot of Greek mythology elements.
Issue 1
30th Oct 2017, 4:17 PM #17
kyrtuck

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Hi! Just click on my banner in my signature :)
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30th Oct 2017, 5:28 PM #18
Timelapse11

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You could have a look at mine: Surge
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2nd Nov 2017, 3:59 AM #19
ST3R30

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idk man i guess u could take a look at mine as well right here.
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2nd Nov 2017, 4:09 AM #20
MrTorchy

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http://legacy-ignition.webcomic.ws/


here ya go bud
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