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"How do you think of the intro to the animated version of my comic?", 25th Apr 2018, 9:50 PM #1
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25th Apr 2018, 11:50 PM #2
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I love the music and the simplicity of it. I also love the way you draw faces, heads and hair as well as how the movie just flows without any skipping and such. I see a lot of promise and the mood makes you excited which is good because it entices people to read. It's got a bit of that old fashioned anime feel to it especially with the hairstyles and music. My only criticism is that it should contain a scene with each of the characters in some kind of actions pose and it needs more full body shots, but even without them, it was fun watching the intro. I as someone who has yet to get the hang of it (me), the synchronisation of the music with scenes and such impressed me.
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26th Apr 2018, 12:03 AM #3
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Shows a lot of promise! I like the way your draw faces, but I think your body proportions could use a lot of work. Right now it looks quite strange, because the heads are large and anime style, but the bodies are very small and look more cartoonish. I also wonder if some of the clips could be a bit faster? Anyway, those are some nitpicks. Well done for making this, I know it's very difficult to animate, and it looks well made. -w-
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26th Apr 2018, 12:27 AM #4
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I don’t want it to be anime styled though. I’m trying to break free from that. I really like the American comic style

Merged Doublepost:

I’m also trying to convert over to the regular comic art style. Also about the body, I can’t help but draw it like that, considering I used to read cartoony comics all the time. It really hurts my drawing..
Well, I mean, I can draw hands

Merged Doublepost:

Also for you guys, what art style is your favorite?
Your random art style, comics (America), or manga
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26th Apr 2018, 12:43 AM #5
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This idea is super cool, I've thought about this but I've dabbled in animation and...yeah no lol, respect to animators.

Really liked the song and animation , though can't help but still see the anime influence (maybe i'm biased), but I can also see some western influence coming out. The others have already given some good advice, and maybe try experimenting with more dynamic angles in the future? Keep it up.
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26th Apr 2018, 1:37 AM #6
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I'd really like to watch it, but...
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26th Apr 2018, 1:45 AM #7
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Don't be so hard on yourself. Nobody's art is perfect and true artist always improves. To be honest, I like both North American and Japanese anime. I can't choose. Both are beautiful and both influenced my art.
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