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"Utopia Next, a sci-fi continuous story webcomic!", 3rd May 2018, 12:50 AM #1
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Hi everyone, I'm Sadi, author of Utopia Next. The comic is a sci-fi adventure story that also has a good amount of science fact involved; it's set one hundred years from now and attempts to show a future much like our own could be... tech-wise, anyway.

I've prepared a video that will help you to understand what Utopia Next is about, and you can view it right here:



The comic itself is available on my main website as well as here on ComicFury, and posts every Wednesday!

I hope you like the comic, and please, tell me what you think about it! Thanks!

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"#7 - Calling China", 10th May 2018, 1:52 AM #2
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New Issue - #7, "Calling China"

Sometimes the right call to make is one overseas.

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15th May 2018, 3:49 PM #3
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I've just read the comic up to now, so here's my impressions:

The worldbuilding exposition is very dense, I've read through it because it was only seven pages, but if it had been going on for fifty pages, I don't think I'd have followed that pacing this far. Someone who followed you from the start and gets a new page every other day probably won't complain about that, but it doesn't make for a nice archive binge experience. I think the tech glossary would be better off in a separate extra page, because if an occasional reader forgets what one thing means, they'll prefer to look it up in a single place than crawl through the archive to find it again.

The art is interesting. There are parts where the lineart looks clumsy, but you do seem to understand shapes and perspective, and it looks like you work from a pretty clear mental image of your scenes. If I had to take a guess, I'd say you're an experienced artist working with a new medium. I also appreciate when artists dare to work with bright colours.

I can't comment on the story yet, it's too early on to tell. I'm sort of wary of the "anti-technology" character too, because the accusation of being "anti-science" or "anti-technology" is quite often used to discredit causes like labour rights, industry regulations, or environmental protection, because they happen to go against the interests of some tech-related companies. I hope that's not where it's heading, but well, too early to tell.

And that's all I can say for now. Which is quite a lot of words for only seven pages! I'll be checking it out again!
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16th May 2018, 11:19 PM #4
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New Issue - #8, "Her So-Called Life"

Is it really living when working is your reason to do it?

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24th May 2018, 12:48 AM #5
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New Issue - #9, "An Item of Interest"

Something's come up, and it's waiting downstairs.

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30th May 2018, 11:13 PM #6
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New Issue - #10, "A Literal Scientist"

She'll tell you exactly like it is, every single time... but you'll still be surprised.

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"New Issue - #11, "Welcome to Engineering"", 7th Jun 2018, 2:38 AM #7
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She works alone for a reason.

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"New Issue - #12, "Metal Hand, Iron Heart"", 13th Jun 2018, 10:39 PM #8
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Hilde brings new meaning to the term "Iron Maiden".

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21st Jun 2018, 2:43 AM #9
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New Issue - #13, "The Indirect Approach"

There's avoiding conflict... and then there's Dawn's approach.

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27th Jun 2018, 10:22 PM #10
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New Issue - #14, "Search and Seizure"

In 2118, every lock has its own skeleton key, and Dawn is about to demonstrate why.

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4th Jul 2018, 11:45 PM #11
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New Issue - #15, "A Serious Discussion"

Dawn should know by now to not push Kumiko too far, but...

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11th Jul 2018, 11:52 PM #12
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New Issue - #16, "Security Detail"

When Dawn needs help, it comes in a confident package.

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18th Jul 2018, 10:12 PM #13
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New Issue - #17, "A Night on the Town"

For Dawn, a night out is rarely about going and having fun.

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25th Jul 2018, 10:55 PM #14
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New Issue - #18, "Fight or Flight"

Dawn just had a trigger pulled, and it's not the one on her gun.

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1st Aug 2018, 10:26 PM #15
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New Issue - #19, "White Hat Hacking"

Scott knows Dawn very well - including when to hack her hololink.

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8th Aug 2018, 10:04 PM #16
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New Issue - #20, "True Lies"

The best deception sometimes isn't a lie at all.

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15th Aug 2018, 10:21 PM #17
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New Issue - #21, "Augmented Issues"

Scott didn't see this one coming. Did you?

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22nd Aug 2018, 11:39 PM #18
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New Issue - #22, "Trepidation"

With so many things uncertain in her life, there's still one thing Dawn is sure of.

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29th Aug 2018, 10:53 PM #19
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New Issue - #23, "Seeking Advice"

Kelly makes for a good friend, if an extremely... blunt one.

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5th Sep 2018, 10:34 PM #20
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New Issue - #24, "Odd Honesty"

Honesty may be the best policy, but with Kelly it has... side effects.

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