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"Proofreading, too.", 6 days ago, 11:51 AM #1
Stilldown

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As I am not a native speaker, I could use the help of a native speaker to read and correct the text for my comic TOBT.
In exchange I can offer to proofread any text in german, or do an crossover fanart with one of mine and one of your characters as SFW or NSFW as you want. (Of course this will only work if you don't hate my work, but that should be obvious.)
I've spoilered the text, if you like to correct, just post the spoilered corrected text in your answer, and tell, if you like some crossoverart or translation in exchange.





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6 days ago, 1:10 PM #2
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hey there! I study linguistics at my University and actually specialize in analysis into people who don't speak English as their first language, so I don't mind doing this for fun!

Overall you've got everything mostly grammatically correct - just a few small details that need adjusting for clarity.

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Second spoilered section:


Third spoilered section:


I think I got everything right. Hopefully! Let me know if you want me to clarify things, or if it looks okay!
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6 days ago, 5:10 PM #3
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Thank you a lot. I really meant condensated ectoplasma, as it was vaporized during the effect and condensated on the surface of things before going crystaline.
If you want anything back for the effort, just tell.
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6 days ago, 8:27 PM #4
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In that case you are all good! And no problem, no need for anything back, just happy to help!
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