Finally finished reading what you've posted... I love the story in this! The characters are entertaining and the story is so imaginative. Lots of humor and good heartfelt moments.
I actually quite like your style, but sometimes it's hard to tell exactly what's happening in a panel. But that's my only criticism, really. Otherwise I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!

I'm glad you like it. After tomorrow's update you can expect to see more of it every Sunday.