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Serpamia Flare
Chapter One
Cover Art: Chapter One

Serpamia Flare

Starting from Comic #1: Cover Art: Chapter One
Cover Art: Chapter One
Don't be too alarmed by the difference in art quality in this cover compared to the first few strips of the first chapter! I deliberately did not upload the cover art for chapter one until chapter two was underway~ haha. Sorry to be so jarring!

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“Lookin good”
What program did you use?
I like your style btw.
Awesome cover! Sorry it's taken me so long to get around to reading your story!
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001 - Sigh
I think if I were to redraw this with my current abilities, it'd probably be better fanservice, haha. I guess it's best left as is.
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EDIT: Just read my original comment on this, AHAHAHA! XD; Did I make it better fanservice? I'll let readers be the judge of that, I suppose! XD;;; (As TheD-Wrek would put it: "HD bazongas.")

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If I might offer my advice, I think the main thing this comic would need if you redrew it would be slightly less exposition. :P

A lot of what she's saying could be shown with better art, rather than told.

'Specially since she's presumably talking to herself. I don't know 'bout you, but when I talk to myself, it's typically in short sentences, which're usually quite broken up and incomplete.
Ohohoooo startin off witha BATH scene! Smart.......very smart ;D
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002 - Rawr
I'm sure the baby black batmole has the ability to actually attack besides rawr-ing at the dude, but I think it's having more fun this way.
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I think I have something wrong with my eyes 'cause I'm repeatedly reading "batmole" as "batmobile" >__>
hehe, first time adventurer panicking
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003 - Who are you?
Holy Palm is the only directly offensive white magic spell in the Serpamia Flare realm, known by only very high-level white mages. It'll get mentioned again quite a bit later, so that's just a random bit of info for anyone who's reading. :P
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ahaha, cute x3
Haha, maybe he'll befriend it instead?
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004 - Squik
If only I could draw her in her towel all the time, that would save me a lot of colouring pain...
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Aw! Poor lil thing! lOlol
Nooooo, how could you attack such an adorable creature! ;)
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005 - You can look now
At the time I first pencilled these beginning strips back in 2003, I didn't have a clear idea of how armour or weapon design worked. As a result it really, really shows. All I can say is please stick around, because I promise I do improve on this somewhat in future strips. Really.
This strip has now been replaced with a redrawn strip, as a part of the Redrawing the First Chapter Campaign!

You may view the original version of the strip here!

EDIT: Just read my old note on this, ahahaha. I kept the armour design consistent to what I anchored down from strip 22 onwards for the redrawn pages, phew!

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It's a very good thing he didn't look XD
The armor design is really cool, though :D
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